January 25, 2010

if i could change the world...

Rick
If I could change the world, I would change the number of people present by one-sixth. I would unite all languages because nowadays we have a lot of language. I would take away a factory because they are so many destroy the nature. In the event of nature we can't live until now. If people die out the earth is much better than the present. I would change the murder law strongly Nowadays we are law is feeble. If a murder kill the people, my law is kill the murder. I would eliminate president and members of the National Assembly because they are liars. Nowadays president and member of the National Assembly are incompetent. I think change them. I would subtract the money for rich person. Then the world is better than nowadays. Other people think I am wrong. I think they are wrong.

Erica
Today I will writing about this topic, 'If I could change the world.' One, I will make a rule, 'Don't throw the trash on the road.' But if people don;t keep the rule, I'll make people pay the money. Then, people will not throw the trash.
Two, I'll make people use an overbridges, a subway, and a bus, because the Earth has a lot of air pollution. So we have a duty to save the Earth.
Three, I will abolish the college entrance exam. Then people will be comfortable, and they can get into any school. Good college or bad college, but honor students will be upset, because they studied hard to go to the good college. So I'll make bad students can't go to the good company. Then honor students will not be upset with that.
Finally, I wold make people can't buy drugs. Then people will be healthy and fine, but if we can buy drugs, we will be not healthy and sick. Drugs are very bad, so we never eat that and don;t think about drugs.
If I could change the world, I'll do the best about making good community.


I know I'm not supposed to have favorites, but these last two boys, I really love.


John
If I could change the world, I would make there be no fight. It is dangerous. When we fight, we injure each other, but when the fight is bigger, many people die. It is the war.
Long time ago, when the human appeared, there were also fight. However, it is different nowadays. Because there was no food, they fought to gain more food.
However, we fight because of greed. We have enough food but we always want to get more, more money.
In Haiti, where there was an earthquake, there is many supplies to help them but they fight to get more supplies. If they don't fight, all people could get supplies.
If we don't fight, the world would become warmer.


Kevin
If I could change the world... I don't want to change anything so I will not change anything. Why? Because we need everything, but I want to change one thing: my life. I want to change my life to be fun and exciting life, because these days, my life very boring life. Anyway, if I can change the world, I don't want to change anything, because everything will be need. If I change them, it will be hard to live.

3 comments:

Unknown said...

hmm wow..
you know even as a 'grown up' this question could become an interesting one... 'if you had the power to change one thing in the world, what would it be..?'

lindsay said...

i think your students are much more interesting than mine.
all mine would say to this question is..."one thing i would change is no school." seriously...one sentence answers...help =P

Yo El Lee (이요엘) said...

the first kid's response is a mix of terrorist and Hitler